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Wrote this a while back and left it alone for later revisions. Ended up not revising that much. This is less about my personal style as a writer and more about learning how to work my thoughts into a more eloquent form. This is probably the first poem I've written that's meant as a political statement.
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Oddly depressing, in a Tyler Durden sort of way. Well, if he were a woman, I could see him saying these words.
I liked the opening stanza a lot, but felt it was a bit of a missed opportunity to not revisit the stylistic approach with the parenthesis later on in the poem.
I liked the opening stanza a lot, but felt it was a bit of a missed opportunity to not revisit the stylistic approach with the parenthesis later on in the poem.